Comic 55 - Bird Watching - 01

6th Jun 2018, 11:41 PM in Bird Watching
Bird Watching - 01
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mr.Trouble 7th Jun 2018, 6:07 AM edit delete reply
mr.Trouble
Hmm, I'm guessing this isn't the first store she's opened up, is she kinda like a traveler going from one stuck up town to another, teaching people to enjoy their desires more, Mary Poppins style? As in "When you need me I'm there and when you don't I'll leave" and all that
PillowPrincess 7th Jun 2018, 4:30 PM edit delete reply
PillowPrincess
Nope, this isn't her first shop. ^-^ We're giving a bit of hints and signs of how long she's been at this. You're on the right track dove~! <3
...(RockB) 7th Jun 2018, 8:21 PM edit delete reply
...(RockB)
That's really all about Elliot Carpenter, the "peeping Tom", the one who inherited the Pink Feather instead of riches and land, the Pink Feather that appears to be the one on every regular page of this comic, and you wrap it up with the previous page and that's it?

I don't know what happened... You had it built up so nicely... and sort of threw it away on the previous page (which, by the way, felt kinda wrong on it's own: Isn't Madame Lace the sole top-level expert when it comes to sex & seduction, and when something goes haywire, she doesn't even try to help, she didn't even cover up her victim before she calls a guard?) but up to now I thought & hoped that you would turn the previous page into being a bad dream or so.

I have to admit that I'm disappointed.
PillowPrincess 8th Jun 2018, 12:37 AM edit delete reply
PillowPrincess
We're only five short stories in, dear. There are plenty to go. You need to read more to fully understand why Madam Lace does what she does. And NO, it's not about Elliot Carpenter - those are small snippets of background for you to piece together later. Just be patient. It ended that way for Peeping Tom as more of a joke AND it was intentionally set up for you to question.

Don't count your chickens before they hatch.
...(RockB) 9th Jun 2018, 9:34 AM edit delete reply
...(RockB)
OK - Thank you! I'm still curious about the whole story unfolding and I'm keeping the subscription.

Tbh, from the "short stories" so far I didn't expect that there will be a greater overall story-arc in the future. I'd love to read that!

> And NO, it's not about Elliot Carpenter - those are small snippets of background for you to piece together later.

Ah, hm. So I read the whole comic again and found another one about Kareena, the young woman of the bakery - but that one had something to do with the story it was inserted in. That's why I thought that Elliot Carpenter was the Peeping Tom.

> It ended that way for Peeping Tom as more of a joke

Indeed, it rather looked like a joke and seems kinda unreal. But are you saying that it's non-canon within the overall story? (I think my point about her not helping still stands.)

> AND it was intentionally set up for you to question.

Heh. Who's gonna question a joke... Except me in certain cases, but I usually find little fun in jokes where someone seriously suffers. (To tickle my humor bone, something else is required.)
bongots 9th Jun 2018, 1:40 AM edit delete reply
so she is immortal, hopping from place to place to reinvent herself once she gets too suspicious in another place due to still being the same while the population around her is getting several generations old. i'm getting interesting in the story to be honest, i like it.
bongots 9th Jun 2018, 1:43 AM edit delete reply
*I'm getting interested* lol, no edit button.
...(RockB) 9th Jun 2018, 10:31 AM edit delete reply
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